I feel that Creepypasta stories would be much more frightening if their little details were better researched and they all checked for proper grammar. Cops pulling a gun on a kid who is just holding a knife and talking to his family is just too silly, and the fact that they sentence him right on the spot doesn’t help with story immersion. On several occasions I’ve found myself getting very into a certain story only to be blown back into the real world by a type-o or a very stupid situation. I love Creepypasta but I know that it can only get better.
I love things that spook me and I was surprised when I read this. I loved it! If you want to read a fun scary short story, then I highly suggest this.
One night, I am in bed, beating my wife, when phone ring. I beat phone, then pick it up. I hear voice. Voice says “What you do with my daughter?!”
I turn to wife and demand to know why her father interrupt me beating her. But she say, her father is dead! Then, KGB break into house and arrest me for illegal possession of phone.
Such is life in Moscow.